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Tue, Jun. 14th, 2005, 12:34 am
featherxquill: *Pokes Comm*

Title: Mirror Image
Perpetrator: StrawberryBlondeHazelEyes (really, doesn't that say it all?)

Link: Revel in the crapulence

What It's Claiming to be: A serious story about a case, and a realistic view of the interactions of the team.

What It Actually Is: An excuse to put a Mary Sue in NCIS land.

Choice Highlights: She had bright hazel eyes that shined in the sunlight. She breathed in the crisp morning air. Her hands strayed to her waist, and she pulled a water bottle up to her rose red lips.

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A shot rang out through the air, and suddenly, her body was pressed against the pavement. She could feel her heart beat speed up. Scrapes and cuts stung all along her legs and arms. She could feel the blood drip from cheek.


Well, I almost thought that the author knew just what to do to Mary-Sues, but alas, she lives, and she looks EXACTLY like KATE.

Evilness Rating: Well, there's only three short chapters, so not mauch time for the breaking of wrists. But I wanted to break someone's wrists when Gibbs assualted a member of his team.

Mon, Nov. 28th, 2005 08:38 am (UTC)
emstapole

is it EXTREMELY sad that i actually not only read this, but i also had it on alert??? (i do, however, plead temporary insainity due to lack of good Kate-denile fics)