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Sun, Apr. 27th, 2008, 03:21 pm
xdawnfirex: *pokes the comm*

Title: "Once Upon a Story"
Perpetrator: Something calling itself hhsprincess

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4201408/1/once_upon_a_story

What It's Claiming to be: Tony/Abby Romance

What It Actually Is: I'll quote the most honest review: "Painful to read. More like an incredably [sic] crappy story outline that a retarded 4 year old would be ashamed of."

Choice Highlights: Highlights? The entire fricking story is nothing BUT highlights. Check this: Before getting up to there floors the kiss but this time was different the elevator stopped at a floor and in mid kiss Gibbs and the director walks in to the elevator and they both freak out because there is a rule with no dating between co workers.

Jumped up Christ, whatever happened to punctuation? Or spelling? Or, I dunno, talent. Jesus, just because you have access to fanfiction.net doesn't make you an author.

Evilness Rating: Only two or three - mercifully, there were only four more sentences to that "story" besides the one I just posted. Of course, one of those sentences has a period in the middle of it... WHY GOD WHY?????

Mon, Apr. 28th, 2008 12:30 am (UTC)

I would but I'm sure it would be unreadable.

Mon, Apr. 28th, 2008 12:36 am (UTC)

"Deer Perfesser, Once upon a time their was a team at NCIS agency in washingtin and they solved crimes all the time and gibbs wsa in harge and he smacks tony on the head amd Magee writes books and Abby is this goth chick that prolly cuts herself and kate was their but the she dyed so now is ziva with her sparkly ninjas stuff and they r soooooooooooooo doing it teehee! Teh End."


LOL that was painful to write.