Perpetrator: Something calling itself hhsprincess
What It's Claiming to be: Tony/Abby Romance
What It Actually Is: I'll quote the most honest review: "Painful to read. More like an incredably [sic] crappy story outline that a retarded 4 year old would be ashamed of."
Choice Highlights: Highlights? The entire fricking story is nothing BUT highlights. Check this: Before getting up to there floors the kiss but this time was different the elevator stopped at a floor and in mid kiss Gibbs and the director walks in to the elevator and they both freak out because there is a rule with no dating between co workers.
Jumped up Christ, whatever happened to punctuation? Or spelling? Or, I dunno, talent. Jesus, just because you have access to fanfiction.net doesn't make you an author.
Evilness Rating: Only two or three - mercifully, there were only four more sentences to that "story" besides the one I just posted. Of course, one of those sentences has a period in the middle of it... WHY GOD WHY?????